Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities.
To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?
Currently, everything in our life from society to even our home is affected by information technology because of its remarkable advancement. Personally, I follow the idea that this will bring back more positives than negatives by the rationales following.
On the one hand, people cannot deny the massive contribution of information technology in life. Specifically, it can help humans save time. For example, thanks to its development, housewives do not have to go to supermarkets or stores to purchase food and necessities, for they just sit at home to shop online and with a few clicks, the products will be delivered to their house. Therefore, they can have time to relax and do other things. Moreover, information technology makes everything easier and simpler because of its various functions. For instance, office workers use computers to work online with their colleagues, students find reference materials on the Internet to conduct research and children play video games to escape from the stress of studying. Finally, information technology is also the best assistant to humans. With the invention of artificial intelligence, it is being utilized for a wide range of activities including medical diagnosis, electronic trading platforms, robot control, and remote sensing.
On the other hand, everyone knows clearly that this is an ideal chance for cybercriminals to act, which they can steal personal data of individuals for illegal purposes such as demanding ransom, hacking bank account or committing copyright infringement.
To sum up, I believe that information technology offers lots of benefits to the public, provided that they must have the awareness of potential dangers and know how to limit the risks may occur when receiving supports from it.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41516245487 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01391076001 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667870036101 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.827946025 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197236579575 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754453643218 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795411338468 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109233226048 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696576618211 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.