The internet means people do not need to travel to foreign countries to understand how others live.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Undoubtedly, the growth of information and technology promoted some to argue about the importance of traveling to foreign countries. I agree with the undeniable fact of reduction in the necessity of travel by the advent of the internet; but in my opinion, its importance still remains intact.
Those who are advocate travel abroad highlight the special experience that can be achieved. This argument centers around its value in itself as well as its utility. Individuals who travel abroad can feel a wide variety of different textures of societies. For example, a traveler from a wealthy European nation to a developing country can be the witness of different possibilities of life and accessories which can affect the traveler’s later decisions in life and its political insight. Moreover, those who are into travel justify its expenses by the enjoyable and precious moments that can be touched. Getting familiar with the sort of cultures via traveling meant a rewarding experience and fuller understanding.
Nonetheless, thanks to the growth of internet, knowing about different parts of foreign countries and getting familiar with their culture without ever setting foot there can be possible. For instance, not only could individuals have research on cultures and the details of every tradition in each nation by scroll through related blogs or surfing into the other websites but they also can watch videos on social media like Instagram. Taken as a whole, it can’t compete with the sole aim of travel because travel is more than becoming know about something, it would also engage the individual's feels.
To sum up, using the internet as a comprehensive source of information in order to get easy access to the details of each nation without spending time and money on is understandable. however, traveling gives the traveler some tangible experiences that can influence its decisions later in life so it's a worthwhile expense.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...importance still remains intact. Those who are advocate travel abroad highlight the sp...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...ng time and money on is understandable. however, traveling gives the traveler some tang...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...nfluence its decisions later in life so its a worthwhile expense.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, sort of, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24758842444 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89010470461 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581993569132 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0441323876 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.538461538 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114440393619 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045431324638 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0245795342529 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077935175106 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206822850207 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.