It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Some people said that having a good path in chasing after sport and music career totally based on inherited talents. But I concur to those who argued that all of us totally have the capacity of being a prominent sports person or musician by being taught and practicing.
On the one hand, the majority of people thought that coming into a talent is the key factor to lead to some people’s succeed because those being lucky to have talent find it not too hard to be a connoisseur with no need of spending lots of time in acquiring knowledge as well as put them into practice. Moreover, such people have the tendency to express their gifted when they were little kids which is conducive to them since they were exposed to all of things involving in their ability very early, as a result, they easily have a solid platform to move up the prospective career ladder.
On the other hand, I concur to those who argued that being outstanding sport person or musicians apparently stems from being eager beaver in studying and practicing. Having the passion on playing sports and instruments can give them an advantage in pouring their whole time into that without any tiredness and hesitation. With effective practices and having an insight of what they are following enables them to gain admirable achievements. For instance, my teacher used to say that I have no capacity of playing piano. Having practiced round the clock, I could prove that my teacher was wrong due to my the first prize of a piano competition.
Although many opinions shown that a successful sport or music career depends on inherited talents but I am not agree with this view
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
... have the capacity of being a prominent sports person or musician by being taught and ...
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Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...pends on inherited talents but I am not agree with this view
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75958188153 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53349641533 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581881533101 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.807414866 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.6 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20407531264 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866455153766 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617393471342 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13458485217 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608849281982 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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