"Is It Harder to Grow Up in the 21st Century Than It Was in the Past? Why or Why not?"
From my perspective, it is an obvious fact that growing up in the 21st century is much harder than it was in the past.
First of all, as a student living in this period, I firmly believe that not only me but also many youngsters have to deal with school pressure which makes us find it difficult to grow up. In today’s society, parents put too much pressure on their children because they are aware of how competitive the world is becoming and they also would like the best for their children. Consequently, most adolescents are forced to take part in a variety of extra classes instead of running around outside or playing games. Moreover, the student has to bury themself in studies and cover a lot of grounds to get a degree as it is generally believed that they can not chase a top job without degrees or professional certificates.
Secondly, in the modern world, thanks to the development of technology, social media has a huge impact on the young generation and their life. Many people point out the advantages of social media such as being connected to distant friends, making friends easier, keep touch with family... However, the negative aspects of social media outweigh the positives for most teenagers growing up in the 21st century. For example, cyberbullying is a serious issue which can hurt many victims by only a negative word and even make them have thoughts of suicide.
With all that in mind, my answer would have to be: Yes. Growing up in the 21st century is harder than in years past because nowadays, people struggle with way too much social pressure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72463768116 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56907308692 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61231884058 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.0906976738 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.545454545 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201912877551 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856297322085 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143398050105 0.0667982634062 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187535494137 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161823153366 0.056905535591 284% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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