It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn the culture of other people. We can learn just as much from books, films and the internet. Do you agree or disagree?
When people wish to gain an understanding of different cultures, it is now possible to obtain a lot of information thanks to books, films and the internet. While this is certainly valuable, I believe that nothing can replace the experience of learning about these cultures at first-hand.
On the one hand, learning about new cultures through books, movies and the internet is definitely useful. Firstly, people could save a great deal of time and money by doing this. Instead of wasting several weeks to see a new place for themselves, due to the breakthrough in storing and providing information, it is much easier to stay at home and still broaden their knowledge about different cultures. Secondly, the amount of information which is available via these kinds of media is limitless. Most people nowadays are able to find out about how others live and think through books and the media.
On the other hand, actually visiting different places has many benefits. One of these is to gain valuable insights through what we experience. For example, many of the tourists to Thailand go to watch the shows of transgender models and claim that they understand better the difficulties of these people. Another reason is that traveling to learn about a different culture gives people countless opportunities to make friends and to share their impressions about what they have seen and done during their trip.
In conclusion, I believe that we can use travel guidebooks, films or the internet to „do our homework‟ in order to decide some of the things and places that we want to experience for ourselves, but we can learn more by experiencing new cultures through traveling.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: EN_QUOTES[4]
Message: Possibly wrong smart opening quote: '“'.
Suggestion: “
...el guidebooks, films or the internet to „do our homework‟ in order to decide some...
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Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...to „do our homework‟ in order to decide some of the things and places that we want to exper...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03956834532 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7906552716 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589928057554 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6530902847 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.75 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271291010918 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866116456096 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074201383787 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169996304284 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633208287688 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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