Large companies with massive marketing budgets often portray an artificial and unrealistic view of life. Health and beauty products such as slimming pills are sold to users who believe they can quickly lose weight. The consequences, though, can be fatal.

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Large companies with massive marketing budgets often portray an artificial and unrealistic view of life. Health and beauty products such as slimming pills are sold to users who believe they can quickly lose weight. The consequences, though, can be fatal. Should health and beauty products be ban or more strictly regulated? Support your view.

It is true that there is too much variety of health and beauty products in consumer market today. A number of manufacturers by the efforts to maximize profits have done deviate the true values of these products, even though they provide detrimental products to consumers. Therefore, some people suggest that governments should ban such products. However, I believe that authorities should only manage more strictly because of following reasons.
Admittedly, a huge number of health and beauty products have certain detriments to users. It is indisputable that harmful chemicals still be used despite warnings about health problems since they work quickly to beauty or lose weight. Many skin whitening products, for example, are believed to be responsible for allergies, even skin cancers. Furthermore, cosmetic companies often over-advertise about the ability of their products. Consequently, consumers easily be abused these products with the hope to improve health and beauty quickly instead of good habits such as diet and exercise.
Despite the negatives mentioned above, governments should not prohibit these products because of some reasons. Firstly, not all cosmetic products are detrimental to users. Actually, there are numerous products that help people improve their health and beauty. For instance, some formulations of cucumber may make the skin smoother and brighter. Secondly, people have rights to choose how manners to make beauty whether that can cause harms to their own health. To illustrate, some people even accept pain and physical deformation to undergo cosmetic surgery just for beauty. Finally, the cosmetic industry has huge profits and contributes greatly to the national budget. If the government bans all cosmetic products, it will not only eliminate an industry that creates jobs and profits but also lead to cosmetic smuggling that is more difficult to control.
In conclusion, although numerous cosmetic products contain detrimental compounds to health, I believe that the prohibition of these products is impractical. Instead, governments can impose some policies to control the production and consumption as well as organize campaigns to enhance knowledge of the people about the true features of the cosmetic products.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6081871345 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81029900787 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543859649123 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0052201919 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.947368421 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0526315789 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199610003778 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622056767959 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473181155656 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129496501365 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555348679256 0.056905535591 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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