Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out.
In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?
Nowadays learning foreign language is considered top priority. Although, there is a lot of debate going on between groups of people whether learning first English or local. With saying that learning local language first is vital for someones career, i think every one should learn English afterward.
Fistly, the world is becoming more and more globalized. And in the result of that every sector and company is demanding well-educated people, which English accounts for main part. Moreover, it is evident that English is needed almost in every part of our own lives. For instance, when we travel around the world the only globall accepted language is English, which will remain to be. Therefore, it means we have no choice to learn English in order to establish communication with other societies and cultures. Ultimately, in order to show success in our career, we must acknowledge it as a valuable asset, so that we will
There is no doubt that local language is the cornerstone of country culture and heritage. But these importances at the edge of extinction. Although, i think there are several ways of preventing it. First, there is need to be more cultural events empowering usage of the local language, such as spelling consets, language festivals, etc. Furthermore, government agencies should give more detailed information about how important is it to preserve the nations language , so they get more aware of containing it secure.
To conclude, English is a crucial necessity for personal development and communicating with world. While mastering local language and preserving it is a key responsibility for someone as a citizen.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...t is it to preserve the nations language , so they get more aware of containing it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, i think, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23018867925 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87762985383 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5214378847 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306344570735 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994222431649 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654023564096 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174799681711 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638740996978 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.