Living in big cities is bad for people's health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Not only once had I learned about the life in the enormous when I turned on the television or flicked through the pages of a newspaper over the past few months. Whether living in the urban area negatively impacts on people's health can be a matter of considerable debate. I completely agree with this point of view. In this essay, I will support my opinion with examples.
There are two main reasons why I agree that life in big cities is detrimental to health. Firstly, various polluted factors such as air pollution, dirty food exert an effect on people's health. For example, in Ha Noi, not only the level of air pollution which stems from the vehicles or factories is alarming, but also the safe hygiene standards are underestimated. Therefore, local people who live in the urban area can suffer from many serious diseases such as cancer, heart attack. Secondly, the pressure from work or prices is a contributing factor on a range of mental health problems. Because the services in big cities are more exorbitant than these in the rural area, people have to make more money in order to make ends meets. As a result, they feel more stressful and depressed.
Turning to the other side of the argument, those who are against my opinion may claim that people, as well as their offsprings, approach to public health services. Therefore, they believe that they have an opportunities to develop themselves. For instance, people do not spend much time going to the hospital in order to treat their diseases or have a regular check. The people made the point but considering my viewpoint in the preceding paragraph, it is relatively insignificant.
All thing considered, it is the belief of many that living in the urban area give some benefits, but I can not agree. However, the situation can be different in the particular ways.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: an opportunity; opportunities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80317460317 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68760862308 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590476190476 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3751289122 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5294117647 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41176470588 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200358669251 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549775190653 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543127498941 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981016349662 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055221346653 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.