Many countries invest money to prepare competitors to join top competitions like Olympic Game and the World Cup. It is necessary to offer money to encourage children to exercise. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The severity and significance of exercise has attracted countries to spend their expenditure and foster competitors to develop encouragement towards young children. This notion is still in argument but many individuals believe that this is completely necessary, of which i second.
To begin with, exercise is beneficial for children’s health. With the development of entertainment equipments, juveniles are captivated to stay indoor. However, this is the cause of numerous disease, such as obesity, cardiovascular and so on. Playing sports will maintain the body’s balance by evaporating water through sweat and therefore, preventing sickness. In the long-term, exercise will keep the body active and healthy, not only physically, but mentally. Sports can help reduce individuals’ anxiety and stress. A recent survey informed that adolescents and teenagers suffer from a considerable amount of schoolwork, and this proportion is alarmingly increasing while they are unable to release tension. With adults allowing and encouraging children to exercise, it will help them relaxed and distract their attention from studying.
Secondly, exercise increases the productivity of one’s work. While many parents are unaware of the invisible effect of exercise, it stimulates one’s intelligence and creativity. A morning work out promotes neurons and muscles, which keeps the brain functioning efficiently. In fact, children who are unable to express their skill and critical thinking will be highly developed by doing exercises regularly, which enhances their reflexes. The government fostering young competitors by investing in the sports field and setting up scholarship would attract potential youngsters to participate and win well-earned prizes. This action is a strong support towards exercise and raise public awareness to attend physical activities.
Conceiving the favorable impact of exercise towards humans’ lives, it is crucial to spend expenditures to develop young sportsmen joining international competition and encourage children to participate in sport.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.05704697987 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23828285275 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647651006711 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9521083101 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.176470588 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5294117647 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0974055895419 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0288118106844 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359662484784 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716136537333 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245565061722 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.84 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.57 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.68 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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