Many countries today are experiencing high levels of migration from rural areas to cities. What are the reasons and the main effects of this?
Give reasons for your answer, and provide ideas and examples from your own experience.
Many countries today are experiencing high levels of migration from rural areas to cities. What are the reasons and the main effects of this?
Give reasons for your answer, and provide ideas and examples from your own experience.
Nowadays, the number of people migrating to cities is increasing gradually. This essay will discuss the mains reasons and then describe the possible effects of the problems.
In my opinion, the foremost causes of moving from the countryside to cities are low living conditions, economic factors. In the rural landscape, there is a lack of many things, featured food, amenities,... lead to the discomfort, hopelessness for the residents here. For example, to enjoy an appetizing meal is not simple for those who live in a place far away from the city because of their busyness, they are up to their eyes in work to make ends meets for their whole family, even there is no time to rest. Thus, migration is in need at that time. Moreover, the problem is accentuated by the economic factors which are fewer job vacancies, low-paid salary, no chance for promotion,... Due to the shortage of industries, companies, or various jobs, the fact that the inhabitants have fewer choices for their career, they probably don’t pay much attention to their occupations, they just focus on the salary. Besides, they not only deliberately put aside their dream, but also hardly have the intention of promoting or look for any opportunities in their working places. All of this adds up to the motivation for migration.
The possible effects of this problem include lack of human resources in the rural area and overpopulation in the cities. First of all, immigration results in the shortage of employees in small communities, which leads to the company go out the business afterward. For instance, the number for this aspect of production is 10 workers but presently 5 people remain, it contributes to delay of products and the company will be in debt. People choose cities for their new life and leave their hometown behind so this village can not be out of poverty. The sudden increase in the population in the city also has a bad side. Lack of accommodation, food,.... are editable things when it comes to overpopulation. Some people become homeless after moving there as to buy or rent a flat is very pricey. Besides, overpopulation still severely affected the air and water qualify.
To sum up, migrating from a rural area to an urban area is a big problem nowadays. It’s mainly caused by low living conditions, economic factors and results in lack of human resources in the rural area and overpopulation in the cities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, still, then, thus, as to, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2139.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 445.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80674157303 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64564537773 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514606741573 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 691.2 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 445.0 20.2975951904 2192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 2139.0 106.682146367 2005% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 445.0 20.7667163134 2143% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 142.0 7.06120827912 2011% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393641250593 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.393641250593 0.084324248473 467% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.308462521331 0.151304729494 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.238103036478 0.056905535591 418% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 223.7 13.0946893788 1708% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -380.2 50.2224549098 -757% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 176.8 11.3001002004 1565% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.1 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 29.15 8.58950901804 339% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 9.78957915832 552% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 180.0 10.1190380762 1779% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 54.0 10.7795591182 501% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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