Many criminals re-offend after they have been punished. Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
Controlling the criminal rate is pivotal to provide the security of society; however, recently, there has been a huge problem that many offenders repeated their criminals upon having been released from jail or finished their punishments. This essay will give both some compelling reasons and proper solutions to reduce this issue.
The police observation and education are the most contributions to the criminal repeats of offenders. After experiencing being arrested, they know much more advanced methods to break the rules. Moreover, police have many things to focus on in lieu of observing them. Thus, it is easy for them to break the rule again without being suspected. Relating to education, almost criminals are not educated about their criminal acts or specific jobs that they could work after being out of jail. As a result, they do not aware negative influence of illegal actions they make for society. Besides, they do not have any skills or jobs to earn money for their future life. They, therefore, have no options to live except continuing committing crimes to have money for their life.
Returning to the method to prevent this situation, those who committed crimes should be not only managed more strictly but also educated about how to be a decent citizen. Police headquarter ought to list and concentration on those who committed crimes. Besides, they should be restricted to a specific area and managed by locals. Regarding education, criminals have to be trained some skills and particular jobs to make sure that they will have jobs after being punished. This action impact positively not only for society but also for the economy by introducing more and more employer for companies.
In conclusion, observation of police and education are the prominent reasons for repeating crimes, thus, managing after having been punished and training them to be better citizens for society are the most suitable solutions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21474358974 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62953179462 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554487179487 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5568600068 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.6875 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357760098326 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112857030112 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746351373124 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205608495772 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541320741724 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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