Many people are choosing to find information online rather than in books Is this development positive or negative

Essay topics:

Many people are choosing to find information online rather than in books.
Is this development positive or negative?

One of the most discussed issues nowadays is that an increasing number of people do not use books in order to search any information instead of this they use the internet. In my opinion, while people can widen their knowledge when they use the internet, I believe that this development is negative as it leads to the loss of national history and cultural heritage.
Firstly, it must be admitted that when people use the internet for searching any data it helps them to widen their knowledge. In other words, people read a lot of additional information in the internet when they try to find special information. Moreover, they learn many new things in the internet about cultures and history from distant countries and they get knowledge about world history. As a result, people become more intelligent and enlightened about many things about humankind being and their knowledge become richer than it was in the past.
On the other hand, I believe that this trend is negative as less people use the books as more they become unnecessary for humankind. The reason to this is that when people do not use books they lose interest and do not value them. As a result, people do not save books at their homes and in the libraries, they throw away them as a garbage, consequently, people forget about cultural and national heritage. Another point to consider, is that there are a lot of incorrect information in the internet about history and this data can misled our younger generation. For example, the most popular web resource “Wikipedia” this source is open source and any people can write and correct any history facts, as a result people have already lost some of important information.
In conclusion, although people can learn and discover many new interest facts about human’s history via the internet, I consider that it will lead to negative consequences such as history loss and having wrong information about our history.

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Average: 4.3 (2 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95718654434 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76308113578 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467889908257 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.4069575967 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.083333333 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4166666667 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198618425705 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863956657213 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321469549324 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132946006532 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188651017982 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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