Marketing and promotion is the key to a sucessful business. To what extent do you agree

Essay topics:

Marketing and promotion is the key to a sucessful business.
To what extent do you agree

nowadays, hcmc is one of the development city in Vietnam. hcmc has been becoming a central economy where gather many organizations from many different countries in the world. If you wanna apply to those companies (it helps you promotes your career path) you have to learn and keep yourself a lot of knowledge and some skills : teamwork, communication, self-work skill,... And apart from that you have to learn and keep yourself the most important skill is language skill. It's related to companies you wanna apply . The popular language now is English, you have to own yourself listening and speaking skills

Votes
Average: 2.2 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nowadays
nowadays, hcmc is one of the development city in...
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Line 1, column 59, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hcmc
...one of the development city in Vietnam. hcmc has been becoming a central economy whe...
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Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...my where gather many organizations from many different countries in the world. If you wanna ap...
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Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'promote'
Suggestion: promote
...a apply to those companies it helps you promotes your career path you have to learn and ...
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Line 1, column 366, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...teamwork, communication, self-work skill,... And apart from that you have to learn...
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Line 1, column 511, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...Its related to companies you wanna apply . The popular language now is English, yo...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 41.998997996 26% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 505.0 1615.20841683 31% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 100.0 315.596192385 32% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.16227766017 4.20363070211 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73058136423 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 67.0 176.041082164 38% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.67 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 148.5 506.74238477 29% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.9673927788 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1666666667 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101320188158 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487728733845 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435865814918 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101320188158 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 78.4519038076 27% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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