Modern lifestyle is completely different from the way people lived in the past. Some people think that the changes have been very positive while some others believe they have negative. Which point of view do you agree with? Why?
Nowadays, the modern world has witnessed an enormous change in lifestyle. While some people suppose this practice can leave numerous impacts on human life, I convince that it is totally appropriate to the contemporary life on these days.
There is a popular belief that living a life of convenience and modern made people face to a proliferation of complicated and tremendous problems, such as stresses and diseases. Because the pace of life has been much higher, people have to work much harder to catch up with these changes creating a living environment too pressing and stressful for them to concern about the surrounding world. Spontaneously, modern people have become struggling in keep the work-life balance making them have less physical activities and social interactions. As a consequence, the limited world might cause directly negative effects on people’s emotion causing the dramatic stresses as well as health problems in long term.
However, the developing civilization has enabled human kinds to enhance their style of living. In the Era of the advanced technical support, people may have much more time to enjoy life to the fullest with the variety of tools fulfilling human’s needs. In fact, the prevalence of GYM centers on modern-day is a clear evidence. It seems so proper for the busiest man and woman to work out so that they can keep fit and maintain the excellence health thanking to modern equipment in sport clubs. Because of its advantages and conveniences, more and more people to make this activity as a daily routine even living habits. Then, the health condition has been upgraded significantly and people become more flexible and enduring than those living in past.
In conclusion, any coin has its two sides but I believe the contemporary civilization brings an overwhelming benefits to the human life. An up-to-date man know how to utilize these benefit effectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, then, well, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20388349515 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90809068692 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598705501618 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5046912788 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.857142857 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215387143278 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675449231132 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473407950881 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114769585068 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615612868031 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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