Now a days modern modes of transport are available; still some people believe a bicycle is best way to get from one place to another. Do you agree or disagree?
In the modernization, trasport system is necessary for everyone rather than bicycle for community from one place to another . however bicycle is cheapest way, healthy for body,non polluted some many benefits of this but it is used for few distance. In my opine,it is best for everyone but oppose the modes of transport is fastest way to travel. I totally agree with the statement,i shall explore in the following paragraphs.
Initially, some people believed that bicycle was good way to commuting one place to another in the past but in the present time it is not usefull or helpful for a needfull person because the youngster not prefer to use bicycle for travel another one change the technology day by day. It helps to avoid bicycle. Moreover, bicycle is beneficial for health but at the time of modern it is not useful to us.people have not enough time ,so they prefer to use transports or their own vehicles to travel here and there.
Furthermore, transport system is best way to travelling one place to another in at time. It is expensive way, pollution also created for damaged tge environment while usees of cars,bikes,truks,etc all transports.thereafter, also increasing traffic with that reason accidents incline day by day. Transport is effect to vehicles, breathing problems, for example,in the year 1998 , the death rate of India inclined by vehicles emited smoke.people out of homes with wear masks their owm mouths.
To conclude, i believe a bicycke is a good, green,and healthy way to commuty from one place to another. However it is not good for everyone. They have no time to travel them.it is use for limited area ,it is not fulfill the requirements of the people as per their expertations from a modes of transportation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, moreover, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9590443686 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04237240923 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546075085324 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.2181414293 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.769230769 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26652532792 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987508388594 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735186265737 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170764310062 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207773663004 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.