Nowadays, having a meal with family is demolish due to which affect people life . Discuss and give your opinion?
In the modern scenario, every individuals lifestyle is changing day-by-day with the hell of technical.The culture of having a meal together is vanishing.it has numerous affect on persons life as well as on society.According to my prospective, I think that this problem occur due to hectic schedule.In the upcoming paragraphs, I will discuss.
In the past time, it was a tradition to eat food with family because people believe that by sitting close with them one should share their thoughts and understand feelings with their families.Presently, this culture is disappearing because people busy to earn bread and butter by which they have no time to interact with family members.Apart from this, the generation gap also leads a misunderstandings in togetherness while meal time, youngsters like to eat junk food in restaurant, but old aged eat traditional food by which they connect with culture.Moreover, aged like healthy food which younger dislike and due to which this trend is happen.
However, there are some negative affects of this phenomena on individuals and community.First and foremost, when teenagers do not sit with their families then the bonding between them dying out by which misunderstanding are occuring and are disturbing the relationships of the family.While, sitting with their parents children's learn the social and moral values by which they can become a good person in society.Along with this, it also impact on community because of individual have no manners then they do not behave properly with others members. So, it have a bad impression on others who live with them.
To conclude, it is important having a meal together because it helps to make better harmonious relationship with family.Moreover, by this one should learn ethic values from elders which help them to behave well in society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, apart from, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25342465753 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27619286211 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571917808219 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.2975951904 286% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 213.402905322 49.4020404114 432% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 306.8 106.682146367 288% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.4 20.7667163134 281% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.0 7.06120827912 269% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269982104522 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143529465763 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040034342682 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159494204509 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350371399508 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.5 13.0946893788 248% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.61 50.2224549098 25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 11.3001002004 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.06 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.1190380762 249% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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