Nowadays more and more older people compete with younger people for the same jobs. What can be the reason for this? What would you suggest as a solution?
The world presently face a challenge as competition for a certain job description exist between the older workforce and their younger counterparts.Obviously, unemployment has caused this, which could be tackled by provision of employment opportunities by the government.
To begin with, the number of people who are unemployed increase daily, with less work positions, being responsible. The economic situation in some countries resulting to closure of most companies, leading to fewer available offers had led to the issue. To illustrate, in Nigeria, due to the incessant terrorist attacks, majority of the multinational organizations had left the nation.Consequently, the remaining industries with lesser openings had to be competed with among the age groups.
However, the problem can be solved by building co-operations to provide more opportunities for both young and old. The agencies should ensure that different jobs for all age groups are created, as well as enacting laws stipulating offers meant for the groups. By doing so, the old and young would do different jobs. In London, jobs that require a lot of energy are only undertaking by the young ones while those requiring less strength are done by the elderly. For instance, factories are majorly populated by the youth with vigor and power while offices with the much older ones.
In conclusion, the reason for the competition between the old and young is mostly due to fewer available jobs which can be brought to an end by government creating more jobs and ensuring there are different types of job for age groups.
- Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older, while others think they should stay at home with the family. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.78
- Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older while others think they should stay at home with the family Discuss both views and give your own opinion95
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30039525692 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19817805778 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596837944664 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.2912124633 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.1 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258037789479 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920294425078 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558383875198 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141307337724 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304976576971 0.056905535591 54% => OK
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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