nowadays young people have to make decision on their own about their future however some people think parents teacher can make their future decision discuss both views and give your opinion
It is well said that today's "children are the leaders of tomorrow". presently, youngsters has tendency to make their superior decision own self for their upcoming life whereas other assert that parents and teachers are best to choose quality decision for their life. here I discuss both view with my own perception
first and foremost,Gone are the days when youngster were illiterate and depend on others.presently, an account of quality education and advancement of Technology they are become a more skillful and educated as compared to past they are living with the modern trend and know what is wrong or right for their life. Thus young people like to make quality decision for their life by ownself. moreover,due to modernity youngster do not want to expect from their Guardians or mentor. therefore do not take burden on their caretaker's head .as a result they make the decision on their own and living Independence. but others have conflicting view
on the other hand, parents and educator could be lucrative to set young people's Life goal therefore they faced and enoromus type of problem in their life and veteran different stage of life both are experienced. thus They are enable to youngster to take decision .what is more ,there is no deny that caretaker are understand the youngster's thought and strength the weakness therefore they know about in which section our children or student are giving best performance. so ultimately teachers and guardians are good decision maker for their younger futures live
Tu recapitulate, both side have their own significance .making decisions is fruitful to set life in future. in my opinion youngster make their decision on their own because this trend make them self depend but before taking decision they discuss with their parents or guardians
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, as a result, in my opinion, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14915254237 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78743023379 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538983050847 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.5338918155 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.9 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.43177527086 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197209871594 0.084324248473 234% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131832870779 0.0667982634062 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301677701083 0.151304729494 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819084239988 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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