People increasingly access the news online these days, rather than buying newspaper and magazines to find out what is going on. Some people predict that, because of the spread of internet news, the newspaper will disappear at some point in the future.
Do you agree that newspaper will die out in the future?
In today’s modern world, with the rapid development of Internet and technology, people hold different views whether newspaper die or not. I agree with the statement that in somedays in the future, a newspaper will be replaced by the online news.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why some critics believe that newspapers have advantages in their own ways. This is because the accurate rate of information in these ones generally higher than the online news. With the strict process, each newspaper was carefully censored and edited before publishing. In addition to that, the readers are likely to avoid adverse impact on their eyes as read on a modern gadget. Therefore, it seems that newspapers still useful for some readers, especially elder people.
On the other hand, I personally agree with the idea that online news perhaps replaces the traditional news in the future. Firstly, these days almost individual own modern gadgets such as Ipad, a smartphone which able to connect the Internet and convenience to read online news. There is well illustrated by the evidence that the recent poll by UK government found that 95% citizens own at least one technology device. Reading news from social network or website bring to users not only promptly information but also vivid illustration by appealing videos and images. The second highlight benefit of online news is that readers would save money because almost news website is free. Furthermore, this reading way also protects the environment, for not use paper in processing produce. Thus, I concur that online news might defeat the tradition newspaper in the future.
In conclusion, although people have been argued newspaper will disappear or not at some point in the future. I believe that the news online era is coming and this tendency will enormously be developing in the future time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: THESE_ONES[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'these' instead.
Suggestion: these
...use the accurate rate of information in these ones generally higher than the online news. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, so, still, therefore, thus, well, at least, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15131578947 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63243407159 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582236842105 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.4969509928 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.875 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344874518236 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112029327837 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799413720789 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22086958373 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446472271298 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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