People sleep less than before. Why? and what are the effects of this?
Compared to several decades ago, people in today's world have an insufficient number of times for sleeping. This essay will clarify the reason as well as the consequences of sleep deprivation.
Many factors are contributing to sleep deprivation, especially for the workforce. Firstly, many companies in the world urge the worker to work long hours as they want to achieve a certain purpose, for example, to improve productivity or to meet the market needs. Consequently, the employees have to perform their duties more than 40 hours in a week. Secondly, for the metropolitan city such as Jakarta where the public transportations are inefficient to accommodate an increasing number of commuters, the workers required at least 2 hours in a day to go and ford from home and the workplace. Thus, it is time that they should be used for resting, yet, it is spent on the journey to the working place.
The lack of the number of sleep would lead to several detrimental problems. First and foremost, overworking employees will have a higher risk of accident at work. The current research in the United Kingdom reveals that the workers having sleep time below the recommended hour in a day will be risk 3-times greater to expose to an accident at the working place. Moreover, this behaviour will bring out some of the health-related issues such as obesity and mortality. As a result, this habit not only will lead the problems for the worker but also a country as the health insurance will be increasing dramatically.
To sum up, lack number of sleep is resulted by various reasons such as company policy and mass transportation system in a country, and this issue will result in several consequences such as an accident in the working area and health problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, at least, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94949494949 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89509822198 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8983679866 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.076923077 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9230769231 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.09798520995 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416834995556 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349175635368 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0714958721497 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030380637986 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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