Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tentions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The international crises of today's world compire of intense issues and global tensions. The situation has reached a point where every nation must remain discreet while taking each and every step ahead in order to dodge political rifts, disputes and dissensions. However, in a world full of dilemmas, variety of contests and sports tournaments provide a relief to the people and lighten thier mood while encouraging nationalism in a secure way.
It is an undeniable fact that even the smallest conflicts can greatly affect the citizens and also disrupt the peacefulness among them. Since the first world war which contiuned for fout years and also one of the deadlist conflicts in history, we may have the idea of the outcomes of such events but still the prevailing situations reveal the likeliness of such circumstances to be happpned again.
Neverthless, moving forward in the futher while keeping things like these in our minds does not help at all, instead it is always wise to indulging in other activities occasionally. The world wide entertainment programs like football and cricket matches do not only refreshen people's minds but it sure keep everyone's minds off from this crises for a while. Futhermore, some of the nascent sports like kabaddi, virtual football, bossaballs and many more internet mediums for 24 hours in order to keep people relaxed and cheerful.
The emotion of patriotism, although, sometimes escalates awful situation, just like the current incidents on the line of control of India and Pakistan where ocassional firings occur even in the mind nights, after which sometimes citizens get angered and discontented. Hence, it could be claimed that these sport events are the only way to induce patriotism safety.
In conclution, since the fluctuations of the global tentions can not be anticipated we should always encourage all these outdoor entertainments to make people avoid thinking about it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27184466019 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78919721003 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647249190939 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.5895018706 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.090909091 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0909090909 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141447860966 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512091076597 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396379385226 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0633226245295 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332599996616 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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