Presently,a lot of material in the form of music,films and books is available online free of cost.Is this a positive trend or negative?
In contemporary world,there are a number of materials such as films ,music or books is available on internet today without any price.This essay will believes that it has a worse impact on young generation as well as it is against copyright.
Nowadays, technology is flourishing by leaps and bounds which makes people's life easy.With the hell of internet individuals learn everything free of cost. But,it affects on producers and writers songs,movies and books because they have sights on which material will be uploaded online can demolish their business because no one would be interested in buying their original products from the market.As a result,it hurts the individuals and also de-motivated them.
Moving further,it has negative impact on childrens which should not be neglected.In the current scenario watching videos and searching unnecessary things on internet.Consequently,their minds diverted from studies which impact on their poor academic performance.Apart from this,it also affect the bonding of teenagers with parents because they spend less time with families which creates circumstances like,minors not interact not share their problems.For instance,the survey was conducted by Cambridge university which revealed that the schools which provided free WIFI access to students showed the perfoance decline by 20% .
In conclusion,the available material over the internet is undoubtedly free but it has many demerits which have to be seen yet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, well, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71100917431 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33879579944 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678899082569 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 179.485486878 49.4020404114 363% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 249.0 106.682146367 233% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.6 20.7667163134 210% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.4 7.06120827912 317% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140733800064 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847831139225 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394176474699 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961975881879 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394660469175 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.3 13.0946893788 208% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.37 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.73 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.27 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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