Question: Some people say that increase in car is the major problem in cites, while others believe there are other serious problem in the cities.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
What makes up a major problem in cities is now a contestable argument among people.There are some who cite the enormous growth in the use of private vehicles as the most challenging issue, while others believe that other factors such as overcrowding and poor road infrastructure are more serious. In my opinion, the latter view is a more serious issue than the former.
On the one hand, proponents of excessive number of cars is the fiercest issue negating cities argue that its use has caused a number of road traffic accident and air pollution.To begin, most of the drivers of these vehicles do not actually have driving license permitting them to drive, and at such are not professional at it.This indicates that the ability to understand traffic signs and rules is lacking, with accidents being the result. Moreover, air pollution is now a concern, because majority of these cars are not road worthy and produce enormous exhaust fumes which saturate the air with carbon monoxide.To illustrate, a recent research concluded that by the year 2030, majority of city inhabitants would develop lung diseases due to atmospheric contamination.
On the other hand, others hold the believe that overpopulation and dilapidated nature of the roads are more serious an issue in cities than just increase in private cars. This is because, the migration rise of people in search of greener pastures is alarming. Moreover, it has led to cities becoming densely populated, so bringing about issues such as unemployment and epidemic of communicable diseases.Furthermore, the challenges of poor state of city roads cannot be overemphasize, since citizens cannot safely commute without being involved in accident,as a result, scores of persons have lost their lives in this.To give an example, recent study by Federal Road Safety proved that the accident rate in cities are 50 percent more than in suburbs.
In conclusion, those that argue that greater number of vehicles are serious issues facing cities agree because of the resultant traffic hazards and pollution. However, others, myself included, believe that increase in population and the inadequacy of the roads are of major issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, however, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23714285714 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90546143021 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565714285714 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.485394456 49.4020404114 294% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 203.666666667 106.682146367 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.8888888889 20.7667163134 187% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5555555556 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173653843065 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827161664069 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718235545643 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11568778913 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812007683 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.7 13.0946893788 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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