Research shows that overeating is equally harmful to people's health as smoking,therefore,the advertisements of certain food products should be banned similar to cigarettes. To what extent do you agree?
The experts say that overeating should place equal value on smoking regarding people's well-being. It is argued that advertisements on food products have to be prohibited as cigarettes. Personally, I agree with the statement that overeating needs to be controlled to prevent future risks.
It can be explained that people who eat too much are in subconscious dangers both physically and psychologically.
When it comes to physical factors, it can lead to uncomfortable digestive problems such as bloating and gas when eating unhealthy foods. Furthermore, according to British Medical Centre, binge can also cause to bone and joint which is because excess pounds put additional pressure on your skeleton. What is more, when obesity is the result of overeating, they're also at an increased risk for certain types of cancer and high cholesterol. They might also develop high blood pressure, which can contribute to an elevated risk of having a stroke.
On the one hand, there are mental health dangers which arise from eating anything without discrimination. A large portion of their self-image and self-esteem is connected to how you feel about their looks. If people have gained extra weight from overeating, they might not feel confident about themselves. Over time, this can actually lead to depression, according to Brown University. In addition, Amount of food that a normal person eats is not satisfied their mind so that they may keep eating over and over again. A vicious cycle will happen.
In conclusion, although people surely have the freedom to eat what they want, it is necessary to avoid eating too much. An appropriate amount of eating habit is encouraged to everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, if, look, may, regarding, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22058823529 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90550984454 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636029411765 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5664619109 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.75 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153894545169 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507213964754 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589870631456 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09184523239 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0864579825741 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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