Schools should not force children to learn a foreign language To what estent do you agree with this statement

With regard to teaching program in many schools around the world, it is often believed that foreign language subject should be compulsory for students of any age. In this essay, I would like to examine this viewpoint and provide my personal conclusion.

To begin with, it is a matter of fact that learning new language requires students to remember and understand a various of vocabulary, grammars and sentence structures in both general and academic types. As a result, if foreign language subject could be compulsory for students, it could give them a great opportunity to develop their ability of remembering in a better way which can be used in other subjects such as mathematics and chemistry.
Secondly, it is also true that international languages such as English and Chinese play an important role in shaping our future lives. To be more specific, those languages are essential not only for students who want to apply for a university scholarship to study abroad, but also for many adults who usually use international languages in order to communicate and negotiate with their foreign clients, sponsors and partners. Moreover, learning another language certainly can allow people to approach to different culture in different countries, which is necessary for everyone to broaden their professional knowledge.

However, it should also be borne in mind that each student has different ability to learn how to read, listen, write and speak foreign languages fluently. For example, some students can be easily excel in studying Chinese while the others have struggled to grade high scores in this subject. Therefore, forcing students to learn one foreign language at school without teaching them the relevance of this compulsory subject to their present and future lives, can reduce the motivation of approaching new language of many students .

In conclusion, I personally believe that although an international language like English subject should be compulsory, students should be taught about the importance of learning this subject and also given some optional choices of what kind of language they want to study.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, to begin with, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33827893175 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82078676895 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557863501484 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.5096809412 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.545454545 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6363636364 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.7272727273 7.06120827912 209% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233034972646 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998959969121 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558607560808 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149580418699 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439584537441 0.056905535591 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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