In some cities in the world, life quality is declining. What are the reasons and solutions for this problem?
In recent years, it has been witnessed that the standard of living among people is declining. While pollution and the shortage of housing are the cause of this, I believe that proper solutions should be taken into consideration.
Indeed, pollution, which negatively affects people’s lives, is the major problem when they living in metropolises. Significantly, since the world has been industrialized for years, factories and industries are increasingly constructed. This contributes to such social and environmental problems as global warming and the spread of harmful disease. Taking Vietnam as an example, where industrial areas are mostly built inner cities and near residential areas. They usually emit a remarkable amount of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. Consequently, this increases susceptibility to various health issues related to the respiratory system. Furthermore, the deficiency of housing also poses a problem among people. As people mostly transfer to big cities to live. However, if the density of population is incredibly high, they will find it extremely difficult to find a place to live. Hence, they tend to live in crowded areas or even slums, which is an ordeal to live a healthy life.
However, alongside the influence of pollution and the shortage of housing, I believe that there are several ways to address them. First, authorities should force managers to relocate their industries or companies far away from residential areas. This will be beneficial to not only reduce the number of toxic gases released in the environment but also improve people’s health condition. Second, they should also expand cities and construct more buildings to serve the needs of people living in big cities. For example, if dormitories and private houses are prevalent in schools or other areas, people will be able to find a place to live and meet their basic needs.
In conclusion, although the mentioned problems above have an adverse effect on people’s lives, I think that there is room for improvement, which is easily achieved by taking proper solutions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40243902439 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97630314792 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582317073171 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2557297044 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4444444444 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61111111111 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147934641133 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434483326695 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292365742522 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0869184484961 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323577073295 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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