In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Permanent accommodation is considered to be more significant for people than renting home in some countries. This situation has various reasons, and in my opinion, there are both positive and negative effect.
Possessing a home brings a lot of advantages to our life. Firstly, houses and buildings are real estats with high value. Investing in this field is safer than buying stocks - a non-stable property. Besides, in your own home, you can decorate and fix things following your taste without waiting the permission from the landlord. For example, in some apartments, fixing and decorating require the allowance from the building manager which is a long process. Lastly, having a long term living at a place will create opportunity for developing firm relationships with neighbors.
On the other hand, the convenience of renting home is undeniable in some situations. If the person often moves from place to place, being a tenant is a better choice. Packaging and unpackaging in rented house are faster than a permanent accommodation. Moreover, mortgage when buying house might put a heavy pressure on some people, which is very stressful compared to spending small amount of money each month for renting. For instance, the buyers who borrow money from the bank have to live in fear for their house being repossessed when they cannot pay the mortgage.
In conclusion, house owners certainly have more benefits than renters, but not all of the aspects are positive.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'permanent accommodation'.
Suggestion: permanent accommodation
...ckaging in rented house are faster than a permanent accommodation. Moreover, mortgage when buying house m...
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Line 7, column 80, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ave more benefits than renters, but not all of the aspects are positive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20168067227 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79792143374 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.663865546218 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1232736592 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4285714286 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267764752388 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815018370303 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638115839429 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158794991156 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109658020893 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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