IN SOME COUNTRIES, OWNING A HOME RATHER THAN RENTING ONE IS VERY IMPORTANT FOR PEOPLE.
Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
In some countries, it is important to have a private house rather than hiring one. In my opinion, this is a positive situation.
Generally, people always wants to possess a home. They constantly have in their mind that latch on home which means significantly: you are financially independent, grow up. Moreover, if you own a home is abandon. You can do what you want. You freedomly paint your wall with your favourite colour. Celabrating everything flow your imagination. Other way, when you rent a apartment, you will have to obey the rule. Some rules make you uncomfortable. You can't sing loud or maybe you can't have pets and you can't do everything without host's permission, it's not great !
Another perspective, renting a home which is not waste much expense as you pay for buying a home or building it. But you also have from pretty house onwards big house. In addition, you never worry about any phenomenon destroys your dear house such as natural disaster. Besides, renting a home is flexibility when you work in many places. You are not anxious about market crashing.
In conclusion, Having own house is important for some countries. That absolutely positive situation. In my view, I prefer owning a home because when in my home I am I and I don't have to endure something I don't like.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...rtable. You cant sing loud or maybe you cant have pets and you cant do everything wi...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...oud or maybe you cant have pets and you cant do everything without hosts permission,...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...me because when in my home I am I and I dont have to endure something I dont like. ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...I and I dont have to endure something I dont like.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79464285714 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77805865247 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.1952864355 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.6666666667 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.4444444444 20.7667163134 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277922370528 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929096958557 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545572661176 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181051648431 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467534978977 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.61 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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