Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school than secondary school.
There are some opinions stated by specialist that it is better for juvenile to start courses of second language at primary school rather than secondary school. From my perspective, children should be in progress of learning foreign language, that could bring greater benefits to children’s future. In this circumstance, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
On the one hand, some believe that applying the second language at primary school age children can cause some difficulties for children. There are some studies point out that most children’s brain is advisable for the low quantity of core subjects such as math, physic and chemistry, at elementary level, along with that, extracurricular activities. However, with the emergence of secondary language at primary program, children might be overwhelming, causing stress or other serious psychological illness. Second, the development of children is merged with other elements which are schooling, outdoor activity and physical exercise, therefore children can be implemented a comprehensive development physically and mentally. But yet, a foreign language at early age could be an obstacle in the comprehensive development. The amount of time of a day is finite, children might could have not sufficient time to enjoy other activities supporting the physique. As a result, this phenomenon can cause physical inactivity in children, even worse, they perhaps suffer from obesity or cardiovascular diseases.
On the other hand, others state that the advantages are considered in this circumstance. The early start at learning English is a solid hinge for the future. To be more specific, with the practices of second language at the early stage, the young generation can absorb sufficient knowledges to be successful in their beginning career. Moreover, with solid English, the youth can have more option in making decision in where they want to study college. For example, with an IELTS band 7.0, the youth can choose to study in America or Europe with high ranked university after finishing high school, which can support their promising future. Along with that, learning English at primary school can offer children to be sufficient in immigrating other nations. For instance, Canada welcomes immigrants with proficiency from other countries. There are lots of occupations required high skilled English and other major for immigrants with high rate of wage. As a result, young generation could have a better future.
In conclusion, children can have a comprehensive development when second language is removed from the primary school program. However, applying a foreign language to the primary level is a great start for children career.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2295.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 416.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51682692308 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9645251782 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492788461538 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 711.0 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.041225762 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.285714286 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8095238095 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334752879936 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107124361437 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127254682506 0.0667982634062 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261342867727 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116036809076 0.056905535591 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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