Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want.
Is this a good way to raise children?
What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?
The first and foremost responsibility for all parents is to fulfill their offspring's needs. However, some parents indulge their children and not only buy them whatever they ask for, but let them do whatever they want.
In my opinion, this is the worst parenting's style to raise a child. it is an undeniable truth tat children's logic develop gradually. they are sometimes unable to judge well what is really good for them, that is to say, they act base on their logic. For instance, a five-year-old girl who has allergy to cats, keep asking her other to buy her a cat. Obviously, all of us agree that the mother shouldn't buy her a cat, as its put her life in danger. but, making decision to say yes or no is not always as easy as this case. sometimes in situations which are not matter of life and death, parents are easily overcome by their children’s shriek and tears. Yet as a mature, we all know universe is not always saying yes to our desires.
In the first place, the least consequences of this attitude is having a spoiled child. Second, parents by buying all the things children ask, without any hesitation, not only ruin their chance of having wish for something or dreaming about it, but also prevent them to boost up the ability of planning and trying to gain whatever they want. Moreover, the children who always have heard yes, will be more fragile in the face of opposite opinions and failures in the future. As a result, we are not raising a happy child, but rather a sensitive and demanding person.
To sum up, parents must provide their children, but that is not to say they have to grant all their requests. they should resist children's unreasonable demands and also sometimes they should just postpone satisfying their desires.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, really, second, so, well, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up, in the first place, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72580645161 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52551804887 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577419354839 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0968658228 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5625 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.522142846421 0.244688304435 213% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153272279275 0.084324248473 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128413381356 0.0667982634062 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.349082085788 0.151304729494 231% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078765149423 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.