Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society.
Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.
Crime and punishment have been debatable issues in all societies. Certain individuals suppose that the death penalty is advisable for brutal criminals, whereas others think such a measure is obsolete in the modern world. Although I agree that capital punishment possesses some advantages, I consider it should be abolished in all countries.
On the other hand, capital punishment can reduce prison expenses for the government. The money costs for the detention of prisoners every year that can use for other purposes such as helping disable or poor people, adopting wild animals,.. and so on. Also, the prisoners who do not change their behaviors when being free will continue causing issues in other prisons. Hence, the possible solutions, in this case, is capital punishment. Indeed, the decreasing number of prisoners assists in reducing financial pressure for the government.
On the other hand, the court is led by people who can make mistakes and send suspects to jail by mistake. In some cases, the judgment can change because of finding new pieces of evidence, but victims who are killed can not be resurrected. Therefore, innocent members of society can lose their lives for the actions of others, true murderers. For instance, in Viet Nam, Nguyen Thanh Chan ( Bac Giang) fully vindicated after 10 years in prison just when the true criminality is arrested. However, no one makes sure that his life after he was released will be back to normal due to the stigma of people around. Therefore, the lack of objectivity in ascertaining whether a person is considered guilty or not remains still too high to let condemn somebody to death.
To sum up, it can be concluded that despite its apparent benefits, I reckon that the execution of a human being ought to be out of a realm of punitive branches of legislation. Although capital punishment may be considered a crucial instrument of retaliation in some cases, I believe that the judicial branch defies perfection, which likely leads to an error of judgment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, whereas, for instance, i reckon, such as, in some cases, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06006006006 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73981855326 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627627627628 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6911145979 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1176470588 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41176470588 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187056098526 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566550384116 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406964848809 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111573115262 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543827046282 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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