Some people believe that it is the responsibility of the government to transport their children to schools Other says it is the responsibility of the parents to get their children to school Discuss both views and give your opinion

Essay topics:

Some people believe that it is the responsibility of the government to transport their children to schools. Other says it is the responsibility of the parents to get their children to school.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Transporting the students has become major topic of Concern in the modern society. I believe that using the school buses provided by government could be beneficial for students in order to Commute to school.

Undoubtedly, Parents instinctively are concerned about the well-being of their children. Nowadays; there are numerous shocking news about a drunk driver or the broken bus services which injured plenty of innocent pupils., so it is reasonable why parents tend to place their children under their supervision. Furthermore, some student gets bullied by their peers when they are on the school buses, in this case they cannot walk away from situation. Consequently, this problem might lead to major issues in a long run including the fear of school, panic attack, and anxiety.

However, I believe that school transportation system is far more advantageous. Firstly, labour market is increasingly competitive and cost of living is extremely high as a result both marriage partner has to work which means that they need to rely on school services to transport their offspring. Secondly, school staffs and school bus driver are professional and are often well trained to take care of students. For instance, when a child falls over and get him injured, they can react quickly and give him first aid. Finally, if each parents wanted to use their own cars for transporting their children the results would be disastrous in terms of air pollution and traffic congestion, but using a bus school would help to reduce these mentioned incidents.

In conclusion, while some parents have worry about the wellbeing of their children, but it seems to me using the School bus is the safest and cleaner mode of transportation.

Votes
Average: 8.8 (6 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16785714286 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82154384936 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632142857143 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9631432863 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.583333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29979903273 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106122355816 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541342076513 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177766677374 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045712132912 0.056905535591 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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