Some people believe that playing musical instruments can be beneficial in many different ways.others think it is a waste of time to play a musical instrument.discuss both views and give your own opinion .
Nowadays music is playing a pivotal role in younger life.Due to this,they can get a platform in music field.few masses fathom that playing a musical instrument can be beneficial in many different ways. But another reckon that it is a ware of time to play musical instruments.in this essay I will discuss the both sides through shape up my opinion by the end. It is crystal from that,playing a musical instrument;how can be significant for the clans in many ways.in these day everyone busy in their profession. However, some younger plays a musical instrument for relaxation their body.while,they can remove their work stress. Few young people have hidden talent to playa a musical instrument. Furthermore, can make profession in music field.with this, they connect with their erudition. Because, they play musical instrument which are related with their delicacy. For instance, masses relate punjabi grace then they play only punjabi musical instrument. On the other hand,few clans fathom that it is only a waste of time to play a musical instrument. Mostly, parents have agree with this statement. Because they think their minors plays a musical instrument with study time. Then , they take over burden in their life. However, the younger are playing musical instrument at all the time while they donot expand the time with their family. Because they destructive only music career. For example, few parents want their children become a doctor, engineer or teacher.they donot like music career. In conclusion, I believe that there is no single conclusion still. It is only depends on the children if they have keeping interest any profession . However, parents does not interference if children select any career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22545454545 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78873330661 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552727272727 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0088819046 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8333333333 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2777777778 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40680338716 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143119348992 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114487885467 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.40680338716 0.151304729494 269% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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