Some people consider price as most important
thing to think about when buying product (such as cell phone) or
service (e.g. medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree?
It is thought by some people that the price of a product or service is
essential to consider before deciding to purchase something. While I
agree that people need to consider carefully before spending large
amounts of money in order to avoid debt, the necessity of the purchase
must play a role in the decision to buy.
It is essential that people take time to reflect on how much money they
should spend on an item or service, and whether or not they can actually
afford it within their available budget. Over the last few decades, the rise
in personal debt has escalated as people are tempted to buy goods and
services due to pressure from advertising and the increasingly easy
access of credit cards. For this reason, any purchase that is costly and is
bought using credit ought to be well thought through, particularly when
the item is a luxury item that is not actually essential.
On the other hand, there are circumstances when the cost of a service or
item becomes an irrelevant consideration. A typical example of this would
be when someone’s life depends on a product or service, such as a new
treatment for a disease not offered through normal channels. In such a
case, a person’s budget becomes redundant and the expense should not
deter someone from proceeding with the purchase. However, these
situations are rare and in most circumstances price ought to be
considered so that excessive spending is planned and budgeted to avoid
serious debt problems.
In conclusion, people should deliberate carefully before spending large
sums of money on goods and services, except in cases of dire necessity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 41, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...should spend on an item or service, and whether or not they can actually afford it within the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02909090909 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72279875456 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556363636364 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 27.9599713877 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 138.3 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.38176352705 548% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189712896176 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076831433008 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601266792219 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0505458923926 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674153156197 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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