Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
In this day and age, Due to with the prevalence of advertising, It is said that advertising is increasingly succeeding in attracting and persuading buyers . Whereas other people believe that because advertising is too ubiquitous so they seem not to concern it any longer. From my perspective, I think that one of the most successes of advertising is to encourage people to buy things.
On the one hand, The main reason to explain why people do not take notice of advertising as they used to because it causes boredom to people. There are some kinds of advertisements which are similar to each other but it usually hit the headline on social media and TV. Besides, sometimes it also gets on people nerves as it spoil the flow when they are working or watching. Therefore, they think that it is not too important or special so that they care about it.
On the other hand, Advertising nowadays is created by a wide ranges of eye-catching models coming from different brands. So it makes people to buy a lot.For example, like TV 3D with its visual effects and convenient design. It drew attention from a thousands of consumers to make a purchase though it is quite cost an arm and a leg .Furthermore, Thanks to modern approach to buyers, advertising gets accessibility in an easy way and exerts curiosity to consumers. For instance, such as Products are advertised on Shopee, with viral Baby Shark song and celebrity endorsement , it captured the purchaser ‘s psychology in a long time.
In conclusion, Although it is partly true that nowadays advertising is so quite popular and people tend to ignore it more, I still support the view that it is not too exaggeration to say that advertising really succeeded in persuading people to buy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, really, so, still, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82943143813 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91706838743 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581939799331 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0307544305 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.333333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.75 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321461292692 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113559171551 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732508571395 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208224115644 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696813677356 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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