Some people say that fashion effect our lives in a negative ways. However other say that it has more positive effects on lives. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays trends are significant role in human life. Some people believe that trend is a negative way in their life but others person thinking it is a good for according to their society. This essay discuss both views with my some arguments and surround my valid opinion
Firstly before many times people were not wear clothes and they were not know fashion because they has not enough technology but nowadays , it is 21th century and it is a developing century as well as technology are very developing and many people wearing according to time clothes and doing new fashion. Fashion is Prime need for youngsters because all people wearing clothes and nowadays, they are doing someone fashion if person donot fashion and people say he is backward class person because they have no doing according to fashion. It considers as youthful and creative because before do fashion human in many confidence influence by fashion. It also gives a good platform to people to explore their ideas to enrich the arts of our times because trend is very develop and they have many chances for human like theatre and media. Fashion as an industry also gives employment to millions of people. Fashion do it after that make personalted person
But many people like senior citizens also doing fashion it is not good for their. It is only according to age and after 40 year do not fashion. Many people uses chemical for their face like bleaching , scrub and etc for beautiful skin but it is not good. Skin are naturally after some time damage their face and their face looks is not good after uses chemical. People follow fashion just to show of they waste their money on youngsters even if they expenses is out of their reach.
To some up, following fashion on average level is good but people do not blindly fashion it can effect on their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, so, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74921630094 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28383544695 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467084639498 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.5896259006 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.538461538 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1850732698 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710422393354 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472087291523 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129410845771 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422769458593 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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