Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
it is argued that some people believe that purpose of learning a foreign language is travel or work in oversea. While I have to admit this perspective is accurate to a somewhat extent, I still hold a notion that there are myriad benefits of studying international languages
In a matter of fact, the amount of people learning other languages is more and more increase however, they can only use them when they go abroad to visit or carry out their occupation. In particular, it is unnecessary for the majority of people who not intend to travel or work in other countries to study foreign languages because without using in reality can make their study pointless. another reason why common international language can only support for work or travel, if they was less working in environment where using foreign language, it could be difficult for them to use their second language in another place.
In the other hand, other who are in favour of studying foreign languages can bring promising benefits for leaners. this is to say there are obvious effect of that such as reducing the chances of dementia, keeping our brains healthy for longer, experiencing other cultures or accessing international information. Besides, if people was good at international languages, they could open the door to better employment opportunities. The globalization have brought many investments for countries as well as employments for local people, thus, inhabitants need foster capacity of language to cooperate with foreign partners.
To recapitulate, this is to say foreign languages take pride of place, it brings manifold for people therefore, people should appreciate the crucial of them and have a huge investment in term of time and money in order to achieve best results.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, second, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, in particular, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15972222222 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88220380359 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552083333333 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.5893234336 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.111111111 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373967655132 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162782731652 0.084324248473 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853385923369 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219347832731 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364098218347 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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