Many people want to be successful in their life. However, only a few people achieve one because there are certain reasons behind successful person. In this case, some people believe that talent plays key role while others have perception that hard work is the pillar of success.
If you catch something that you never get before, you should do something that you never do before. Also, you need to practice hard regularly. For instance, if you want to be a rich person, you have to work many hours a day. Additionally, it is obviously true that having good motivation beside hard work flourish natural capacity. Also, the hard work enable us to concentration in our work which is more helpful in our life.
On the contrary, it is common belief that talent is one of the crucial elements for being successful. Everybody has talent since they were born. As a result, many people try to be a success person, but they never get everything what they want. It is because they do not have any natural ability in themselves. On the other hand, in my point of view, talent is God-given, which merely few people have it. For example, some genius people who calculate all mathematical problems in their mind and others those who have photographic memory without more hard-working. Hence, talent is a golden key to success.
Undoubtedly, although talent and hard work have great influence in our success, they are not the only one. Some might believe that wealth, happiness and psychological relaxation cause success. Moreover, education is beneficial factor for this one because it improves our opportunity of jobs. Also, in my view, discipline is vital aspect which boldly help hard work as well.
In conclusion, I believe that you cannot do something consistently well if you do not practice and you are not talented. Although success could be due to hard work and talent, many other factors may be existed, so you cannot always determine an exact way for success.
As we live in this bewildered
As we live in this bewildered world, competitiveness is necessity . Therefor success is only possible when talent and hard-work go by and by. But to the contrast people with great talents get misled on the same that if one has talent there is no such thing that can not make you famous or successful.
While there is a lot possibility that people with great talents achieve great success one should never forget that, good talented people are depending on how they channelize their talents in a productive way.For an instance if someone is great with mathematics he or she will be simultaneously weaker in any other sphere of subject. However, this does not concludes that he is not talented but to achieve the aim to score well overall, he or she has to work hard towards the lagging part. Furthermore, if we talk about the most influential people in the world like Michel Jackson , he was the one who not only with his talent but determination, hard-work become what as he is still known to people as the king of pop. Despite of the fact he had certain issues with his skin and skin type he stayed focused and achieved what he aimed to.
Moreover, one should also not forget the fact that talent alone is not the only key to success , proper guidance and dedication can lead to success . As one should know that success comes with failures, we must try and try until we come to some conclusion without giving up on something.
To conclude, i totally disagree on the same agreement as talent and hard work are the factors which had to be worked together on. In addition to that timely appreciation on hard work by teachers, guiders or parents can get involved the people along to reach out their targeted goal.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 333, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...de hard work flourish natural capacity. Also hard work enable us to concentration in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my view, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9009009009 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61847741857 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522522522523 0.561755894193 93% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3978204538 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7142857143 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8571428571 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.80952380952 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308815931306 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110173135928 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873805824793 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201760284096 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610145514679 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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