Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motor bike To what extent do you agree or disagree

Certain individuals claim that decrease the age of eligibility for driving vehicle would have enhance road’s security. From my point of view, this solution seems to have trivial consequences corresponded to improving safety. In this essay, two viewpoints will be noticed and the effective idea will be pointed.

First and foremost, safety deprivation is pretty conspicuous nowadays especially in ordinary cities and rural area as well. Indeed, lack of impressive efforts from government is available and leads to a number of people who have been killed due to terrible road constructions. In order to cope with this circumstance, first an impressive effort is needed by government by operating infrastructure and modernizing roads and erecting a new parallel between cities. In addition, a serious domination on people’s driving license and operating a rule for impatient and reckless drivers to get banned and restricts their latitude.

On the other hand, some people have another perception which allowing a permission for teenagers who are under 18 in order to go through driving class and have a right to drive. They are A proponent of this insight without considering destructive implications. From where I stand, allowing them to drive when they are not eligible doesn’t solve problems and rise road safety. Because their brain is not performed to manage sensitive moments in driving and they try to put their feeling by accelerating more and representing themselves a professional driver. This may deteriorate other’s safety and end up in an awful results such as accident.

Overall, despite the fact that getting a permission to people who are not eligible to drive is pleasurable and get opportunity to prove themselves, it has a bad impact on road safety and overshadows it later on.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'enhanced'.
Suggestion: enhanced
...gibility for driving vehicle would have enhance road’s security. From my point of view,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, may, so, well, in addition, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31010452962 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03885492338 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627177700348 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5979630817 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.230769231 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157213629391 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515421968966 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400195780837 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935085133516 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00782027364983 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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