Some people think that hard working and determination are the key factors for being successful in the life, other people feel that other factors are important. Discuss both sides, what is your opinion?
Successful life is described by many ways such as hard work, ambitious, and expedient decision about life. Where as many argue that there have been some other matters for that. However, both opinions have some truths although there has some objects too. In my opinion, I agree with most of the success in life happened as per our wishes and aim of future than the other factors like luck, back ground support and so on.
On the one hand many believe that, good future as related to our dedication to the aim and appropriate decision making capacity. Moreover, people must have proper goal to their own life and effort to become successful in life. Mitigate the negativity and focus on to the success would likely to produce a flourish result of ones life. For instance, American former president Obama elected adorably in national election, even he came from the group of black people. Inhabitants in America does not focus on to the race or color on him, rather than they concentrated on to the leading ability and quality towards him. So that if we have an ambition to be success, every one should have an eager to be reach there.
On the other hand, some reckon that, people must have some other factors namely, grace, fortune so on to be successful. To some extent it may help to reach the high level, but the person does not have an energy to go on in the sense it would be a big failure. By the support of someone or financial back ground would help to be success in short way, nevertheless, hard work would pass over such kind of success. For example, many youngsters from the high class family would be success in life as per the eyes of others. While, good education or willpower to be successful also important too
In conclusion, people often discussed about success related factors. In my perception it would be by ones own interest to be an esteemed position in life rather than someone's behalf or some special factors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in short, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64534883721 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38929439179 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543604651163 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6814981542 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.875 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.375 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309421203379 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102132832646 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708752310087 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198748095785 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711423359709 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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