Some people think that introducing new technology can improve people’s quality of life. However, others believe that free education should be offered. Discuss both views and give you own opinion.
It is sometimes argued that whether offering low-cost education or innovating new technology provides better benefits to individuals’ life. In my opinion, while focusing on technology offers great merits, I believe it will be more beneficial for the growth of society when people are given free training and lessons.
On the one hand, it is true that introducing technology can vastly improve humans’ quality of life. With the help of computers and the internet, people around the world are able to study, communicate, purchase or even conduct scientific research with no boundaries. Thus, the advent of technology is apparently saving a massive amount of financial resource and time for other important purposes. In addition, the application of high technology in medicine has brought miracles to the way of giving treatments. As doctors now have more choices to cure diseases at minimum cost, people’s personal conditions and health problems are surely improved.
On the other hand, giving free education will have a great impact in the long term. Firstly, when individuals have the chance to approach knowledge and develop essential skills, they can then discover their potential and contribute to the society with their expertise. As the society grows stronger, the people who contribute will receive profit in return. This effect is called ‘The circle of benefits’. Secondly, deliver free education to the residents could reduce the cost to take care of jobless residents’ who usually miss their study. A report showed that over 5 billion dollars from national fund were spent to support the citizens who could not find an occupation last year in the U.S. This amount of money could have been minimized if the government established public institutes to across the country to give these people basic skills to find a job.
In conclusion, while technology has brought new air to humans’ life, offering free education is still an important task to improve the society and people’s life in the long term.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34567901235 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92347660153 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604938271605 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2990328518 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.714285714 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2142857143 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306179748637 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101297418169 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708631985218 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200018319832 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045697890806 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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