some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. others, however, believe that school is the the place to learn this. discuss both these views and gives own opinion.
In today's world, there has been a continuous debate whether person's personality who being a civilized person of the nation, should be taken up by parents or teachers in the school. In the following paragraphs, I intend to clarify both argument before giving my opinion.
On the one hand, parents are the first teachers, and home is the first school where children learn about basic moral values and social manner. Children before going to school, their behavior are mostly affected by their parents. In the other words, parents are a role model of children. However, there are lots of attitude such as be honest, to respect elder people, to behave politely and being generous which are parents responsibility in family. For example, if parents help a disability person who is blind and want to pass the street, children remember this ethical duty and they mimic parents' behavior in the future of their life.
On the other hand, schools are the second place where kids obey the rules and regulations by guiding school's teachers. As a consequence, children learn punctuation and discipline at times which requires in the workplace and community. Besides, teachers can be effective on students by training them practical experience. I mean kids can participate in charity which is take place by school's teachers. However, schools are places where students communicate with various children with different cultures and character. Therefore, they can learn how behave friendly with others, as a result, act in a good way as the same when they enter to society.
In conclusion, to my mind, person's personality as being good member of the society not only affected by their parents in family environment but also influenced by their teachers and friends when they at school.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, for example, i mean, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12714776632 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66178211377 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560137457045 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1207179804 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.571428571 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279822660503 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887277151964 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0238881019407 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153528445914 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032145188096 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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