Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Some people consider that strict chastisements for driving offences is dominant solution to make roader safer. In my opinion, I suppose that strict laws should be there to punish the driving offenders but the option of other methods would bring better results.
On the one hand, stringent punishments can certainly help to encourage people to have better driving habits. People who are found to be guilty of any driving rule violation should be punished with serious penalties and detentions. Depending on the seriousness of the offences, police can apply strict penalty and fine such as small fines, licence suspension, even prison sentenses. As the result, it can certainly improve the road safety as people would be more cautious and afraid of the consequence of the violation of the traffic laws. The aim of these punishments is to show dangerous drivers that their actions have negative consequences.
On the other hand, I believe that other measures could be more successful to address this problem. The first significant way is to educate the public properly before they start to drive. This could be teached in universities or even as part of an extended or more difficult driving test, so that citizens could have a chance to apply the laws on road traffic course. Secondly, another attention could be paid to safe road design such as using speed cameras to deter people from driving too quickly. Finally, improving the traffic system with modern equipment and enrolling more trained and professional traffic police could be another great way to tackle this issue in oder to reduce the number of accidents or casualties.
In conclusion, people have a varying opinion on how to reduce the number traffic accidents. While some people believe that there should be stricter policies and regulations about driving, I consider that there should be another effective way of addressing the issuses of traffic accidents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15335463259 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64809786391 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543130990415 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0963126199 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.214285714 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365385032794 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121628563062 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640435484233 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214350409419 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348681452666 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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