Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much as noise they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Essay topics: Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much as noise they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people think that they have a right to make noise, whereas others suggest that noise should be controlled. I agree that controlling noise is reasonable. This essay will discuss both views before coming to a reasoned conclusion.

It is evident that out modernization has carried out noise in every single aspect of lives, which made people think that they could make noise in freedom. Therefore, noise was naturally adopted as a part of our lives, especially in releasing noise from using transportation mean. However, people's health could be seriously damaged because of freedom in causing noisy pollution, which must be dismissed. The malfunction of vestibular system, for example, result from suffering from loud noise for a long time, particularly people who live nearly in train station.

It is agreed that controlling noise brings benefits to people, which makes the modern life better. In fact, after a long time and stressful day at work, people need a deep sleep to recharge their battery which can help them effectively push their boundaries in your job. In other words, it is certain that no noise rule should be enshrined in the constitution to improve the health of people. Vietnam has set a rule that all of vehicles do not allow to press horn button from 10 pm to 5 am, and drivers could be fined when without following that restriction.

In conclusion, I agree that noise should be strictly limited to maintain the health of people, especially in noise from transportation mean. To confront this dangerous problem, of course, the government should set up as many practical principles as possible for securing the health's purpose.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 451, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pressing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: pressing
... rule that all of vehicles do not allow to press horn button from 10 pm to 5 am, and dri...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, for example, in conclusion, in fact, of course, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07692307692 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74075421874 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611721611722 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6357310216 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.615384615 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313913807281 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111069757707 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105455060122 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203753641134 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129032466875 0.056905535591 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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