Some people think that travel is necessary to learn about other nations, however other people think that television and Internet is the best way to learn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Roaming around the world is the good way to acquire knowledge about other countries’s culture, traditions and history. However, group of masses reckon that Internet is the most suitable path to learn about other nations. I will shed light on both sides and discuss my opinion in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, with advent of technology lot of trip sites are available on the Internet. Some people are financially weak, as they don’t afford the packages to travelling around the world or country. Therefore television and Internet is the best way to learn about other countries. In addition to it, it is an inexpensive and masses can get information at any time and anywhere. Moreover, it also declines the problem of traffic congestion and pollution.
On the other hand, there are plenty of things one can gain from exploring different places, it includes gaining new friends, new experiences and new stories. For instance, when you start exploring new places, you get a better understanding of the people living, there including their culture, history and background. Moreover, traveling can improve overall health and enhance creativity. It also helpful to learn new language and boosts up your confidence.
All in all, in my opinion, people should take break from their hectic life schedule and travel around the world because it is good for health and economy. Television and Internet only depicts the pictures and videos of the places, not the natural beauty and feelings of that places.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...travelling around the world or country. Therefore television and Internet is the best way...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20833333333 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71721620209 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608333333333 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2667021117 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2857142857 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270807982312 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888003571423 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.094896999476 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15692424012 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636247664382 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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