Some people think that young people should spend more of their free time at home with their families and spend less time entertaining outside, Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
How to manage leisure time comes to an important problem to be solved nowadays since it is a dilemma to choose between spending time with family members and having fun outsides. In fact, there are various reasons for both sides and they can hold water.
For most people, the family comes first under any circumstances. When they are young, they need to show their gratefulness towards parents who raise them up, and then, after growing up, they shoulder the responsibility to support and educate children in the family. In this way, everyone should accompany families, who are the most precious people in the world, as much time as possible. On the other hand, it will stress people out if there is no time to enjoy themselves outside without family members. Life is far more than family, and they need to hang out with friends, work with colleagues or date with lovers.
From my point of view, spending more time with family is needed. Actually, people put the most of time outside and less and less time at home with their beloved because they should work 40 hours per week, meet up with business partners and kit at shopping malls with buddies. There are too few hours for families. In addition, people still can be entertained, or entertained more, when they spend time with family members. No rules to regulate what should be a family gathering and every family member can host one theme they love. Thus, tremendous happiness could be created in family time.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that people are independent of both family and out-family time to be happy, but companying with families ought to be the main parts of daily life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, so, still, then, thus, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7972027972 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38208138028 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7327096063 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363762333361 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126949503827 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928995078706 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217329352628 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0911137526035 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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