Internet is one of the most populer development in this era. Life seems a lot dependent on social media. People are using this invention to find out their medical issues and try to help themselves. Three are different opinions about this invention. Some people appreciate this technology and feel it has all advantages, on the other hand some believe it has more disadvantages then benefits. This essay will explains both views with examples and will ellaborate my personal opinion in the end.
Many people believe that internent has great impact to explore their medical problems.They believe that internet use for their ailment saves their time and money by not going to physicans. For example , it is easy to figure out management plan for their ailment. This saves their time and money . On the other hand , some believes internet is a negative development and not helping people. For example, if people are not going to seek medical help, they can miss some serious medical conditions. This misinformation can cause stress and anxiety. If people are not getting prompt medical attention, this can cause serious outcome.
In my opinion, internet is a great invention if is used properly. It is good to get aware of medical problems but it is more appropriate to get medical help from physicans . Every body has different presentation of same medical condition so it is more worth not to relay on general information . Health is the most important factor of human being so it should be addressed more seriously.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01587301587 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71451468705 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559523809524 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9240727522 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3529411765 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8235294118 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76470588235 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334346985804 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100065475748 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702793710293 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20828478283 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760153880372 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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