Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Although some people work for the same institution in their whole life, other consider that working for different organization is a better choice. In my opinion, I think working for various organization gives people more chance to be successful in job life.
Some people consider working in the same organization gives them chance to get familiarize and comfortable with the environment so it gives them the chance to go ahead in carrier. As an illustration, the same organization has same kind of structure of operation. When people faces same kind of work for long account of time it actually improves their efficiency. Moreover, working on the same organization makes the employee feel that this is their own company inspires them to work more hard for their job which eventually promotes them in job position.
Other people think that changing different organization gives them the chance to learn more and be successful in carrier and I agree. To give a clear example, when someone engages himself to different type of organization he/she learns different types of skill. This skill are really necessary and it prepares him for the challenges which he faces in his job sector. In addition, working in different condition exposes him/her to different condition. By handling different condition people develop to handle stress which makes them competitive for better position in job.
In conclusion, people may disagree but according to me working for different organizations gives people more opportunity to be successful in job life rather than working in the same company
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, may, moreover, really, so, i think, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23228346457 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87725251884 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496062992126 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1104769573 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.75 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.462991102995 0.244688304435 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.203385797675 0.084324248473 241% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118522148195 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.354114569659 0.151304729494 234% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112949731634 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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