Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is a widely held belief that an astronomical sum of money can be paid for reputed sportsmen by profession which is much superior to people doing other jobs and this is necessarily rational. But there is a strong counter-argument of people that this priority is not fair enough. However, I am of the opinion that there is a matter to be debated in the light of several factors before any conclusion can be drawn.
To begin with, professional athletes deserve to give a good deal of money as a reward for their relentless endeavor. Sports professionals are supposed to make more enormous effort and lots of energy might be taken than normal persons. In fact, their physical fitness is more likely to wear out, even they are subject to injuries during the training period. Once a sportsman become a star, he is reputed to everyone around the world and the amount of money he earns is equivalent to the effort he has invested. Besides this, he is capable of promoting his image throughout the countries and thus thriving on travelism of a nation, which can push the country forward.
In other words, a sum of money paid for sportsmen including salary and bonus should not be too enormous as this is so unfair that many people who in other fields are getting by on their low paid money and struggling with their neccesitous plight, let alone a meal is not enough for their life because of increasingly high living standards. Meanwhile, governments ought to pay more money for doctors and teachers, who always get low salaries and they therefore have more motivation to contribute to public health and education.
From all the aforementioned reasons, both the arguments carry equal strength and significance and neither can be refuted outright. I personally subscribe to the proposition that employees in other businesses apart from sports, should get more money in recognition of their effort.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, apart from, in fact, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93518518519 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78374359363 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.4079868902 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.25 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211508795655 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666862966358 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394637285848 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121230556184 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195718109179 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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