Technology
We are living in Techno World. As we know Technology become a part of us. It influenced us unable to live without them. We love everything which is beneficial and we get them in the name of technology.
But somehow If there is a good, then there is way for bad too. We appreciate for the techno innovation increased in every field day to day. It makes us our life easier as well as convenient. At the same time,in few cases that technology isn't everything. Let us say about food scarcity, water scarcity, usage of natural resources, Pandemic issues, environmental problems.
We can't find the solutions till now.
In some case, technology makes us addicted. Basically, it formed for us but we are more depending on it. It's makes us to forget how to survive naturally.
We can't imagine our life without mobile or internet. That's how we are now.
The beneficial of technology is splendid to everyone.
Technology should have to develop more in near future which brings more benefit to environment as well as for humans. They should have to concentrate on their drawbacks and fix it.
So finally, Technology is something that we are ready to welcome and let it's development arise in good way without any crisis.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
We are living in Techno World. As we know Technology become a part of us....
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Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...day to day. It makes us our life easier as well as convenient. At the same time,in...
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Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
... as well as convenient. At the same time,in few cases that technology isnt everythi...
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Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
... same time,in few cases that technology isnt everything. Let us say about food scarc...
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Line 4, column 4, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...mic issues, environmental problems. We cant find the solutions till now. In som...
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Line 7, column 4, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...to forget how to survive naturally. We cant imagine our life without mobile or inte...
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Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ne our life without mobile or internet. Thats how we are now. The beneficial of te...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, then, well, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79620853081 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76314291767 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601895734597 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6072845846 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 53.2631578947 106.682146367 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.1052631579 20.7667163134 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.73684210526 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218359333836 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834832202309 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12950838167 0.0667982634062 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128265140283 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112097148398 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 13.0946893788 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.38 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.